http://blackmagicjazz.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] blackmagicjazz.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] paixaomb 2008-02-20 04:39 am (UTC)

What a sweet fairy tale. But your ending needs work. It grates a little on the amateurish side.
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